You Could Be So Pretty
Beauty comes at a price. And girls must pay.
Belle Gentle follows the rules of The Doctrine to the letter and is so close to ‘Having It All’. The Doctrine helps girls navigate the world now the Bad Times are over by offering guidelines for how to behave. She’s the prettiest Pretty in school, A Chosen One in her spare time, and she’s about to win The Ceremony, making her family proud.
Joni Miller is an Objectionable. Although she is despised by others for rejecting the Doctrine, this is her Choice. She is determined to win the Scholarship into the Education so she can change things- but her biggest rival is perfect Belle.
Being far older than the target audience for this book, I found it deeply disturbing and sad- and yet, as I closed it, I was filled with the hope that for those reading it, it will provoke thought and discussions. The story offers a blistering look at a dystopian ‘future’ where the expectations on girls to be effortlessly perfect, whilst bearing all the responsibility for the reactions which they might ‘incite’ from men, are overwhelming. This is a society where violence against women is normalised, with degrading, dehumanising Smut (pornography) a part of every day life and where any girl who doesn’t find this arousing, fun and healthy is a Frigid. And yet, much of this sounds chillingly familiar, reflecting the everyday realities faced by many girls today.
And this is where Holly Bourne skilfully turns this into more than just another dystopian tale. The society she portrays in intensely suffocating with something on almost every page which causes the reader to feel both intensely uncomfortable and furious…and provoke reflection. Women are told that they have won equality, that they have choice, but ‘choice means nothing if you feel you have no other option than to choose what everyone chooses…if there are significant consequences for not following the established path.’ Powerful stuff.
The other strength of this story is in the characterisation. Joni and Belle are girls you come to care about. The novel opens with glimpses of their past which put them each on the path they have taken in life, instantly creating empathy. Belle is particularly fascinating as she finds herself questioning- and seeking to justify- things which make her intensely uncomfortable. Being an ‘Invisible’, my heart ached for both these girls - and all the women in the story- and for those in real life whose experience is similar.
A note at the beginning of the book warns the story might be triggering, but Holly Bourne should be commended for writing this book. For me, its importance is on a par with ‘Asking for It’ by Louise O’Neal- and that’s saying something.
Clever and compelling, startling and stirring, this is a must read.
You Could Be So Pretty Holly Bourne
Usborne ISBN: 978-1474966832